El Salmo al Salmón

Happy New Year to you all!

This week, I bring you a poem that was published in Punt Volat, titled “El Salmo al Salmón” or Psalm to the Salmon.

Please swing by Punt Volat’s site and give it a quick read. If you’d like, please leave me a comment to let me know what you thought.

I hope this year has started off well for you all.

Peace 🙏🏼

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Chorlton Voice says:

January 17, 2020 at 5:25 pm

Hi. I really like the poem, but maybe you could have cut the last few lines. We get it without the point made! Lindy

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Chorlton Voice says:

January 17, 2020 at 5:27 pm

Hi. I really like the poem, but maybe you could have cut the last few lines. We get it without the point being made overt.
Lindy

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1. Jose Oseguera says:
  
  January 17, 2020 at 5:57 pm
  
  Hi Lindy. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Isn’t that the true challenge in poetry, nay any form of story-telling: when is enough truly enough?
  
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