Chilindrinas [Full Poem]

August 10, 2018

Written by Jose Oseguera

Hello all,

My residency on The Piltdown Review continues with the poem titled

Chilindrinas

Come check it out and leave a comment…

11 Comments

floatinggold says:

August 10, 2018 at 7:29 pm

“Sand castles awashed by a sea of saliva” what a great line.

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1. stripSearchLA says:
  
  August 10, 2018 at 10:23 pm
  
  Thank you. I’m glad you liked it 😉
  
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Allan G. Smorra says:

August 10, 2018 at 11:46 pm

Your mother’s observation cuts right to the bone. There’s a lot more to bread than meets the taste receptors.
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1. stripSearchLA says:
  
  August 13, 2018 at 8:58 pm
  
  Nice play on words. Mom has always had a way with words lol
  
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  1. Allan G. Smorra says:
    
    August 14, 2018 at 3:06 pm
    
    I’m glad that she passed it on to you.
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  2. stripSearchLA says:
    
    August 14, 2018 at 4:48 pm
    
    Thanks!
    
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lfpessemier says:

August 11, 2018 at 6:05 am

I loved this poem — thank you for all of your works.

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1. stripSearchLA says:
  
  August 13, 2018 at 8:59 pm
  
  Thank you so much. Your support means the world to me 🙂
  
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mademoisellefantasy says:

August 11, 2018 at 4:20 pm

It was truly a beautiful poem. I must say that I don’t think I’ve given this much value to bread till this day.

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1. stripSearchLA says:
  
  August 13, 2018 at 11:29 pm
  
  Awww… thank you for your lovely note, Mademoiselle.
  
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  1. mademoisellefantasy says:
    
    August 14, 2018 at 7:34 am
    
    You’re welcome! 🙂
    
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