Never to Return will be published in
Abstract: Contemporary Expressions
Thank you so much for your support and encouragement.
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Never to Return will be published in
Abstract: Contemporary Expressions
Thank you so much for your support and encouragement.
Jose Oseguera 
You are on a roll, Ze. This is story is rich with emotion and human frailty. Great job.
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Thank you, Allan. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to ask if you wanted to collaborate with me. I supply the story, you the image. What do you think?
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I like it! I will contact you at your .gmail address.
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Great! Just got your email, and will reply later today. Thank you!
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Fabulous, well written, well plotted. A great read. A great story. β€
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Thank so much for your humbling comment. This story has been my longest, and I’m glad that it turned out well. Thank you for reading my work. Cheers!
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Firstly, I have to admit that I started, but was not able to read the whole story just yet *points to a list of things that I need to do*…
BUT… I wanted to share this thought that popped into my head. When working with such long story, maybe it would be a good idea to divide it into parts? Publish them either on the same day, or on different days. That split would enable readers to focus on a chapter/ part at a time. It would be more manageable to read/ less scary. This is just my feedback. Not sure if it is any good for you.
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Thanks for reading. I like your idea, especially for a chapbook, but for this particular story, it needed to be in one post. Always appreciate your visits and comments. Cheers, mate π
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Wow that was a very good story. I never saw that end coming.
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Thank you for reading this story. Iβm glad you liked the ending. It was definitely a sneaky one lol
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It was π
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First and foremost, that was an AMAZING plot twist ending! I applaude. It was such a nice… adventure…? Drama…? Whatever that was it was really good. I wouldn’t have thought of that in a million years. Although, it has a much different essence than your usual writing. Maybe it’s the change of time and place? I don’t know. I could really read a part 2. Thanks for sharing! π
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Thank you, my dear. I wanted to create a piece that addressed the treatment of women and this is what came out. I really like writing historical fiction, especially Westerns. I’ll be revisiting this time and place in future stories. Thanks for your support.
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You are welcome! π It was really powerful. I can’t wait to read the next one. π
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Thanks! Iβll try my best to make it worth your level of anticipation π
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Very good post. I am going through a few of these issues as well..
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Iβm glad to hear that this story can bring some closure to what youβre going through. Sometimes fiction can help us to understand what our daily existence is unraveling before us on a day to day basis π
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