Never to Return

Never to Return will be published in

Abstract: Contemporary Expressions

Thank you so much for your support and encouragement.

17 thoughts on “Never to Return

  1. Firstly, I have to admit that I started, but was not able to read the whole story just yet *points to a list of things that I need to do*…
    BUT… I wanted to share this thought that popped into my head. When working with such long story, maybe it would be a good idea to divide it into parts? Publish them either on the same day, or on different days. That split would enable readers to focus on a chapter/ part at a time. It would be more manageable to read/ less scary. This is just my feedback. Not sure if it is any good for you.

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  2. First and foremost, that was an AMAZING plot twist ending! I applaude. It was such a nice… adventure…? Drama…? Whatever that was it was really good. I wouldn’t have thought of that in a million years. Although, it has a much different essence than your usual writing. Maybe it’s the change of time and place? I don’t know. I could really read a part 2. Thanks for sharing! πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you, my dear. I wanted to create a piece that addressed the treatment of women and this is what came out. I really like writing historical fiction, especially Westerns. I’ll be revisiting this time and place in future stories. Thanks for your support.

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    1. I’m glad to hear that this story can bring some closure to what you’re going through. Sometimes fiction can help us to understand what our daily existence is unraveling before us on a day to day basis πŸ˜‰

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