One thing I love about your writing is that I have so many favorite parts within just one story. Such is the case here as well.
Your prose tickles and teases but still maintains the propulsion of the narrative.
I got really emotionally invested in this one too; it took me on a ride. I felt so many different emotions about Jara within one brief story. Well done.
Hello again! 🙂
I really liked the story. Jara went through a lot of shit with her ex. I am glad that the ending is nice. If I wasn’t dead tired and this wasn’t in the comment section, I could have written an essay about this piece. The way you write is simply fascinating. Everything from the structure to the plot is just awesome. You are a huge author role model for me.
Thanks for sharing! 🙂
Hello! Thank you so much for expressing your opinion about my writing so generously. I always find out something new about myself by means of your thoughtful comments. I’m honored that you see me as a role model. Thank you 😉
Hi there, I found your website via Google while searching for a related topic, your website came up, it looks great. I have bookmarked it in my google bookmarks.
Thank you for visiting me, as well. I really like your stuff and I’m glad to you feel the same way about mine. I’ll be sure to check out more of your content 😉 Cheers!
Jose Oseguera 
Great writing on a touchy subject. You kept to the high road.
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Thanks for your comment, my friend. I’m glad you found the story entertaining.
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One thing I love about your writing is that I have so many favorite parts within just one story. Such is the case here as well.
Your prose tickles and teases but still maintains the propulsion of the narrative.
I got really emotionally invested in this one too; it took me on a ride. I felt so many different emotions about Jara within one brief story. Well done.
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Thanks, that’s a great compliment. I’m happy to hear that my writing has that effect on you. Thanks for all of your great help and suggestions 😉
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O my, what a story … very touching
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Thank you for your kind words, Anna. I’m so happy that you liked it 😉
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Hello again! 🙂
I really liked the story. Jara went through a lot of shit with her ex. I am glad that the ending is nice. If I wasn’t dead tired and this wasn’t in the comment section, I could have written an essay about this piece. The way you write is simply fascinating. Everything from the structure to the plot is just awesome. You are a huge author role model for me.
Thanks for sharing! 🙂
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Hello! Thank you so much for expressing your opinion about my writing so generously. I always find out something new about myself by means of your thoughtful comments. I’m honored that you see me as a role model. Thank you 😉
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You are welcome! 🙂
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“She was a princess. I was a Fibonacci number.”
This line is perfection.
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LOL I’m glad you liked that line 😉 I really appreciate your comment.
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I love this, there wasn’t a part that wasn’t interesting. Great work!
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Thank you. Your lovely comment has put a great start to my day. I’m so happy that you enjoyed this piece.
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Hi there, I found your website via Google while searching for a related topic, your website came up, it looks great. I have bookmarked it in my google bookmarks.
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Thank you for visiting my site, Blaine. I’m happy to hear that I’ve made it onto your bookmarks. Cheers!
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Thank you for stopping my blog.
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No problem. Thanks for reaching out.
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Thank you for visiting
Love this piece
Naked pigeon
Great title
As Sheldon Always
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Thank you for visiting me, as well. I really like your stuff and I’m glad to you feel the same way about mine. I’ll be sure to check out more of your content 😉 Cheers!
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I will try my best to visit
I’m not the sharpest knife in the
Drawer As I once was
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You’re welcome to visit any time 😉 Thanks!
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